“brown water before a whirligig beetle’s divided eyes a chair’s steel feet howl time for a mini metamorphosis “
This is so good (not just the quotation, of course I mean the whole poem)! It’s so much! And it swirls in a slow motion like a whole world turning. More of this please!
Ande, I like writing dense poems best. When I try to write minimalistic stuff, I just start to yawn. But some people are really good at writing shorties, but I am not one of them. Thanks a lot.
jb, glad you liked it. Thanks. I have a special liking for the worn.
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“brown water before a whirligig beetle’s divided eyes
a chair’s steel feet howl time for a mini metamorphosis “
This is so good (not just the quotation, of course I mean the whole poem)! It’s so much! And it swirls in a slow motion like a whole world turning.
More of this please!
wow...
I'm not sure if its a bar to go to or one to avoid!
it's interesting anyway.
nice write
jb
Ande, I like writing dense poems best. When I try to write minimalistic stuff, I just start to yawn. But some people are really good at writing shorties, but I am not one of them. Thanks a lot.
jb, glad you liked it. Thanks. I have a special liking for the worn.
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