slender but crooked fingers
and neat paper silhouettes
grow and shrink for the last time
in the brick library
oak brass indigo tea steam
phlegmatic applause
he makes his exit
while man with wild duck in basket
makes his appearance
door creaking fox fleeing into bush
retro cab passing under retro lamppost
two afghan hounds running after it
their paws hardly touch the ground
frost fog diluted with soot
icy through respiratory passages
the shadow play producer’s green coat
with black pompoms becomes visible
then his rye flour complexion
rime in nostril hair
pine-needles becoming blue
all frost no snow
yet
© 2010 Jenny Enochsson
11 comments:
Very nice...
"all frost no snow"
a short but all telling description
I like it
thus through your words we see the man behind the curtain...
Beautifully descriptive, Lady J...
Jenny, another beautiful and haunting composition by you! I love the flickering images of the retro cab, creamy frost fog and black pompoms. A wonderful portrait of word and sound!
This is very possible the best poem you have made; but it's difficult to say in your case.
Impasto is the right word for this piece. I love the feeling you produce and the definite vision you are writing.
she's a rainbow, combing colors in the air, everywhere. nice work, jenny.
So good, Jenny.
"creamy frost fog diluted with soot"
Reminds me of Dryden's "Cold Song."
jb, Cygnus, Charles, Ande, Gerry, Megan, thanks so much! I am pleased you enjoyed this one. Your kind comments made me blush. :)
cool
Thanks, Jesse!
Love your writing :)
Short Poems
Thank you, Marinela. I appreciate your comment.
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