lördagen den 27:e november 2010

The Shadow Play Producer

the shadow play producer’s
slender but crooked fingers
and neat paper silhouettes
grow and shrink for the last time
in the brick library

oak brass indigo tea steam
phlegmatic applause
he makes his exit
while man with wild duck in basket
makes his appearance

door creaking fox fleeing into bush
retro cab passing under retro lamppost
two afghan hounds running after it
their paws hardly touch the ground

frost fog diluted with soot
icy through respiratory passages
the shadow play producer’s green coat
with black pompoms becomes visible
then his rye flour complexion

rime in nostril hair
pine-needles becoming blue
all frost no snow yet

© 2010 Jenny Enochsson



11 comments:

jbkrost sa...

Very nice...
"all frost no snow"
a short but all telling description
I like it

Cygnus MacLlyr sa...

thus through your words we see the man behind the curtain...

Beautifully descriptive, Lady J...

Charles Farrell Collage sa...

Jenny, another beautiful and haunting composition by you! I love the flickering images of the retro cab, creamy frost fog and black pompoms. A wonderful portrait of word and sound!

Ande sa...

This is very possible the best poem you have made; but it's difficult to say in your case.
Impasto is the right word for this piece. I love the feeling you produce and the definite vision you are writing.

Gerry Boyd sa...

she's a rainbow, combing colors in the air, everywhere. nice work, jenny.

Megan Duffy sa...

So good, Jenny.

"creamy frost fog diluted with soot"

Reminds me of Dryden's "Cold Song."

Jenny Enochsson sa...

jb, Cygnus, Charles, Ande, Gerry, Megan, thanks so much! I am pleased you enjoyed this one. Your kind comments made me blush. :)

Jesse.s.mitchell sa...

cool

Jenny Enochsson sa...

Thanks, Jesse!

Marinela Reka sa...

Love your writing :)
Short Poems

Jenny Enochsson sa...

Thank you, Marinela. I appreciate your comment.