Two snow pigeons are sitting on a maple branch looking at lanky Benjamin, who is carrying carrier bags full to the bursting point with root vegetables. His muscles are stretched out like elastic band and he wonders whether he should start going to the gym, which Elsa wants him to. It is several degrees above zero and he is sweating abundantly. Benjamin unbuttons his winter jacket and takes off his frying smelling acryl wool cap. Elsa likes his long locks; they remind her of the fair young men, considerably younger than Benjamin, who she was united with when she was young. Yesterday, however, she noticed a minimal skin patch on his scalp. Elsa is passionately fond of the cult of youth.
He takes a short cut across the field; his crêpe rubber soles sink into the spongy slush grass. Benjamin inhales the wonderful earth smell. The sun is becoming like rape oil. There are many pooper-scooper bags on the ground, both black and pink ones; he finds the last-mentioned especially repulsive. The dog owners have probably missed the two mango-shaped holes in the litterbin above. A smoking jogger runs through the stained slush and blows smoke out of his nostrils. Benjamin is peering at the top of the melting snow waste mountain. Up there, a hazelnut-brown cat is sleeping.
© 2011 Jenny Enochsson
8 comments:
“They should be called snow pigeons, he reflects(…)”
I love this piece of sketch writing! They are really yours in the sense that your work has such integrity and humour.
"Allan decides to remain shaggy as long as he lives."
Salamanda Palaganda!
Salamanda Palaganda! Thanks, Ande. It is refereshing to write prose again. After I was finished with my self-published poetry book, I felt like writing prose for a while and the sketch genre appeals to me.
Wow, super-great. "showy sunflax-blue sky" - too cool. A lovely piece of prose; very personal, very pretty. Thanks for sharing it, Jenny.
Peter
Jenny. good to read yr prose pieces finally. looking forward to the next post. you sure can manage characterization & atmosphere! & humor ^_^
arka
Peter, thank you very much! It is great and encouraging to hear that you enjoyed this, especially since I tried something new, on this blog, I mean. I used to write a prose before I wrote poetry. So, I am grateful for your kind words, indeed.
arka, thanks! Yes, I have been shilly-shally about whether to write poetry, prose or drama. But now I must say that I enjoy writing prose darn much. And I am glad you liked my odd sense of humour too. :)
Hi Jenny, a couple of years ago you asked me to join Flowers of Sulphur and I'm finally ready to do so. If it's still OK, please send me an email invite on whatifg@yahoo.com.au
ch, thanks. I am not engaged in FoS these days as I lack the time, but if you send an email to any of the members, I am sure they will send an invite.
ch, unfortunately, it now turns out that the blog Flowers of Sulfur might be highjacked. Many if not all of us who are members have lost our admin privileges. We are trying to figure out how to solve this and will probably contact Blogger.
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